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Suggestions for my build!

Discussion in 'Creative Server' started by eZyr, Dec 31, 2018.

  1. eZyr

    eZyr Pɾιʂσɳ Nσ-Lιϝҽɾ

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    This is my build on Creative! I really like it so far, but it obviously needs A LOT of work before it's worth anything besides Beginner. If anyone has any suggestions, don't hesitate to leave a reply, or just some constructive criticism.

    Thanks!
    ~eZyr <3



    https://imgur.com/a/pjkEagd
     
  2. Teywer

    Teywer mi pona e ilo li tomo toki

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    Try adding some more detail to those mountains, they are currently very plain
     
  3. eZyr

    eZyr Pɾιʂσɳ Nσ-Lιϝҽɾ

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    I’ll totally look into that, thank you for your suggestion!
     
  4. _JTG

    _JTG Staff Admin | @Josh.#1514
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    Not bad, I am a rubbish builder so no clue how you could improve.
    I'm sure @carstairs95 or someone will.
     
  5. carstairs95

    carstairs95 Active Member

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    Try and add some detail to the ground aswell as the mountains, also try and build a bit more ☺️
     
  6. Joshs

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    You should add more detail and more stuff to make it your own.
     
  7. _JTG

    _JTG Staff Admin | @Josh.#1514
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    Told you.
     
  8. caw521

    caw521 Active Member

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    In terms of detailing terrain, you can try to blend the grass in with the foothills of the mountains, like it's creeping up a bit. Also, you can try experimenting with the greyscale blocks for the texture of the mountain, instead of just cleanstone. Medium-large clusters and splotches of texture always give some extra oomph to the terrain.
     
  9. SilverMC

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    Most other replies already went over the ground and what not, but that cave also has some potential. Maybe add more stuff inside it; personally I would add a dragon wrapped around the mountain, but it's up to you.
     
  10. eZyr

    eZyr Pɾιʂσɳ Nσ-Lιϝҽɾ

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    Thank you everyone for your suggestions! It's really appreciated! <333